http://adam-epp.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] adam-epp.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kari_izumi 2015-02-22 06:45 am (UTC)

I haven't read Bleach in forever but I read this. Your verb tenses are inconsistent in places, but it's fun and I like how nothing is really resolved and how it ends in a messier situation than it starts in.
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