No lube is a nitpick of mine too, and I tried to work that in somehow...I just couldn't think of anything that'd be conveniently lying around Byakuya's office that they could use without breaking the flow of the story and seeming too contrived (what with Kenpachi showing up for "Surprise!buttsexhandjob" and all :P I hope that doesn't sound like me excusing shitty writing...I appriciate being called out on sloppiness)
I'm still glad you enjoyed the fic.
Kenpachi/Hisagi? XD Wow, I never thought much about this one, but that could be interesting to read. You'll post if/when you write/see one? ;)
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buttsexhandjob" and all :P I hope that doesn't sound like me excusing shitty writing...I appriciate being called out on sloppiness)I'm still glad you enjoyed the fic.
Kenpachi/Hisagi? XD Wow, I never thought much about this one, but that could be interesting to read. You'll post if/when you write/see one? ;)